There are ideas here which show promise and I hope that you develop the
skeleton idea into a firm narrative. You
showed the development of ideas
However, the pitch was basic and did not provide a full explanation.
At present there is one member carrying the group and you need to work
as a team.
Share things out and get together to work as a team.
Gather momentum by preparing a productions schedule which you follow.
Explain the performance element
How will you brand the artist?
Your blog is looking thin and you need to concentrate on making progress in this subject. Act now.
We have completed a production schedule and I am currently finishing the storyboard. We will brand the artist by making sure we have several shots of them performing as well as the narrative.
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