Friday, 27 November 2015

First Draft And Audience Feedback


What have you learned from audience feedback?



Our Initial Critique:


  • Our music video is still missing a lot of footage as we have not finished filming certain scenes and part of the lip syncing. 
  • The footage has not been rendered so it is not very good quality at the moment
  • The birthday party scene was filmed in low quality and to fix this, we aim to make it look like a home movie by applying a record and time effect, but this has not been completed yet.
  • The narrative has not been made clear as we are missing the footage that explains what the skeleton is a metaphor for.

Questions for our audience:

  • Do you think our video matches the genre of the music well?
  • Do you understand the narrative?
  • What type of audience do you think would like this video?
  • Which channels do you think this video would be aired on?
  • Can you tell that there are issues with white balancing in the video?
  • Do you think we have incorporated our props effectively? i.e the skeleton
  • Do you think we have used humour well in our video?
  • What would you do to improve our video?
  • Do you think the lip syncing looks natural in the video?
  • What do you like about the video? What have we done well?

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